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分享到QQ空間2014年12月大學英語四級考試剛剛結束，新東方在線名師第一時間對上午的四級考試進行點評。以下是老師作文范文：
范文：
I have met so many friends in my college life. They have exerted enormous influence on my life. However, one of my most impressive friends is my roommate, Li Ming.
In the class meeting on the first day of school, Li Ming did not impress us at all. We started to notice him because he was always late for classes. We were thus impressed by his laziness. I came to know him and his situation because we were roommates and spent much time together: his mother was seriously ill and sick abed in long-term, his father left him and his mother mercilessly. Hence, it was him that shouldered the heavy burden of taking care of his sick mother supporting the whole family. Finally, under great pressures, he balanced his life and study perfectly: he was no longer always late, took good care of his mother and even won the scholarship many years in a row.
The experience of Li Ming can be one of the most convincing cases of the power of persistence and will. He left a deep impression and imposed a durable influence on me. Indeed, friend such as him can be regarded as asset and property in our life. We have rights to choose our own friends，but we should also be prudent and sensible enough to choose friends who can bring us “positive energy”. (228 words)
【參考譯文】
在我的大學生活中，遇到了很多朋友。他們對我的人生產生了重大的影響。然而，我印象最深的朋友是我的室友李明。
在開學第一天的入學班會上，他沒有給全班同學留下任何印象。李明讓我們開始認識他，是因為他總是上課遲到，同學們都以為是個懶惰的人。因為我們是室友，平時的交往比較多，后來我才慢慢了解到他的情況：原來他的母親罹患重病，長期臥床，父親殘忍地離開他們而去，照顧生病的母親和養家重任隻能由他來承擔了。令人驚訝的是，在重壓之下，他將自己的生活和學業平衡地很好：他不再總是遲到，將媽媽照顧的很好並且連續幾年獲得獎學金。
李明的經歷是堅持和意志的作用的最有說服力的例子之一。他給我留下的印象無法磨滅，他對我造成的影響持續深遠。的確，這樣的朋友被視為我們生活中的財富和資產。我們有權利選擇自己的朋友，然而交友的過程中，我都應該足夠理智和謹慎，選擇那些能夠給我們帶來正能量的真正的朋友。
來源：新東方在線
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